[K5pbem] Story Idea Forming In My Brain
William Jordan
logandwj at sbcglobal.net
Wed Nov 1 11:24:17 CST 2006
I'd be willing to proof drafts and provide feedback.
Mike Surbrook <susano at guisarme.net> wrote: I've been considering writing the sequence describing how Marta & Ling
Ling first met. Ling Ling flew to San Francisco to broker a deal and had
hired Marta as a bodyguard in advance. The deal ended up some sort of
doublecross in which various entities (Yakuza, Triads, and what not) all
wanted the same item(s), and Ling Ling was cought in the middle. In true
action movie fashion, the pair spend some time being chased around SF,
fighting it out with the badguys, and eventually falling for each other.
Anyone have any suggestions? Or want to assist?
--
Michael Surbrook
susano at guisarme . net http://surbrook.devermore.net/index/
The Phoenicians were not great philosophers... they pondered the simpler
questions, like "If I stick this spear in you, can I take your stuff?",
"Do you have relatives that would be mad if I took your stuff?", and
"Can my relatives beat up your relatives?"
Doug Robarchek
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