[K5pbem] Story Idea Forming In My Brain
Mike Surbrook
susano at guisarme.net
Wed Nov 1 11:22:39 CST 2006
On Wed, 1 Nov 2006, William Jordan wrote:
> I'd be willing to proof drafts and provide feedback.
Okay. Any comments or suggestions for the inital idea? Anything you'd
like to see?
> Mike Surbrook <susano at guisarme.net> wrote: I've been considering writing the sequence describing how Marta & Ling
> Ling first met. Ling Ling flew to San Francisco to broker a deal and had
> hired Marta as a bodyguard in advance. The deal ended up some sort of
> doublecross in which various entities (Yakuza, Triads, and what not) all
> wanted the same item(s), and Ling Ling was cought in the middle. In true
> action movie fashion, the pair spend some time being chased around SF,
> fighting it out with the badguys, and eventually falling for each other.
>
> Anyone have any suggestions? Or want to assist?
>
>
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Michael Surbrook
susano at guisarme . net http://surbrook.devermore.net/index/
The Phoenicians were not great philosophers... they pondered the simpler
questions, like "If I stick this spear in you, can I take your stuff?",
"Do you have relatives that would be mad if I took your stuff?", and
"Can my relatives beat up your relatives?"
Doug Robarchek
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